Quick Poster Update

Hi Nur,
Right now the poster feels too plain. And there is so much empty space.
1. I suggest adding clouds on the sky and flowers dotting the green hill so there is more going on. Imagine this blown up into A1, the empy space will feel plain and very unfinished.
2. The product packets at the bottom could have drop shadow for further contrast against the background.
3. Atmospheric depth. The hills at the back and the little girl and kite could be faded out more instead on the same value (in terms of black and white) with the boy character. This will further amplify the sense of space.
4. Nothing should be so close to the edge of the poster, like the yellow hand and even the product logo. Here I made a quick sketch to show you what I mean.
5. The yellow colour of “There’s nothing you can’t reach!” does not contrast enough with the green background. I suggest changing it to a paler yellow or even plain white. Adding to this, overall contrast of the whole poster could be increased too using a Levels/Curves adjustment.
6. The yellow stroke around your green logo text could be bolder, it’ll feel more solid and stand out like that.
7. Consider colouring the lineart of the boy and girl, the lineart for the hills are dark green so why not for the humans? It’ll make the poster feel distinctly more vibrant.
8. Also consider adding a slight vignette to your poster so it does not feel so plain.
This is Danny by the way.

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