I have put my poster drafts side-by-side together to compare the changes I made after receiving comments from different points of view.
First Draft 
Second Draft Final Draft
First change :
- Lowered the Horizon
- Made the Logo bigger
- Extended the boy’s arm so it is less close to the head
- Made the product smaller
- Made the girl smaller
- Brought the tagline further from the edge of the poster
Second Change :
- Coloured more of the line art of the characters
- Added drop shadow to product and tagline
- Added clouds to background
- Darkened the background to make the elements pop out more
- Brought the logo further away from the edge of the poster
Nur's Art Process Blog 
One reply on “Final Poster Design”
Yo. Nice poster design. Really brings out what the product is about and it has that fun feel to it.
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